Sephiroth, Zack, and Cloud's Friday night tradition.
Wonderfully written and great in humor! GREAT. Definatly worth reading over and over.
(#) Laylah 2005-11-26 03:57:17 AM
Aaaw, poor bitty Cloud. Good thing he's got such big, strong...helpful friends. ^_^
(#) Ithilwen 2005-12-02 12:18:58 PM
"Army detritus," expressive.
Ah a tale of Cloud from back when he was Dorky Little Cloud with a spike-mullet!
(#) doc 2005-12-07 08:18:31 AM
Heh. I loved this. You managed to keep them all true to their characters and still made this extremely amusing. A lesser author would have been terribly OOC. Great job.
(#) bard_linn 2005-12-26 03:24:25 PM
Wonderful story! I love how you characterized Zack, Cloud and Sephiroth. They all felt very alive, Zack especially. It was a great funny story. This will most certainly be recommended to friends.
(#) Melissa 2006-01-30 11:36:43 AM
Wow that was actually really funny... I think you should write more...ahahah
(#) fyre_byrd 2006-02-16 06:49:24 PM
I love the way that Sephiroth's disapproval is equal for dirty magazines and guns. Then it's lovely that it turns out to actually be a combination and thagt Zack notes that she'd holding her gun incorrectly.
You paint the nasty dirty details of life as a Soldier in exquisite detail. Your wit is clearly honed to a razor's edge. I love Zack's poetical musings about the vomit coloured paint.
That Sephiroth greets every one of Zack's antics with the locker room contraband with "put that back" is wonderful. The way you write Sephiroth, he strikes me as the sort who is very squeamish about any sort of wrongdoing. I think that's very believable given his skill and his impeccable reputation as a warrior.
I adore that Sephiroth actually considers Zack's suggestion that they fit Cloud with an anti-theft device because Zack is so good at being verbally convincing.
This is such an amusing story. Cloud is just the sort to get stuffed into a locker every week like clockwork. It's amazing the way you manage to keep the characters convincing and also manage to produce such wonderful comedy at the same time.
(#) levisrictusias 2006-02-20 10:40:59 PM
HILARIOUS. This really made my night--I was smiling the entire time I was reading this. Brilliant work! =)
(#) Jamaica 2006-04-17 02:21:35 PM
Acetylene blowtorch. Brilliant.
(#) Katya 2006-06-12 02:30:44 PM
Awww. =) Poor little Cloud just can't catch a break. Love that Zack tried to grope him. ;)