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More Surprises

by DrT 3 Reviews

The Final Battle is over. Harry has left Britain, leaving a devastated magical community, a lost Hermione, and a blinded Luna. Hermione becomes Professor McGonagall's apprentice while she cares f...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters: Harry, Hermione, Luna, Snape - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/06/24 - Updated: 2007/06/24 - 3245 words


  • Brother Z

    (#) BJH 2007-06-24 10:42:22 PM

    Can you stand one more comment from the likes of me?

    I think this is a simple typo, but then again it could be a subtle hint of some hidden dynamic. After Harry has his first night with both Luna and Hermione, and after Fawkes adopts Luna, AND after Harry has a second night with Hermione, you have him telling the girls about his daughters. He says, "as I told you I am technically a virgin."

    Did you mean 'was a virgin' or is Harry still avoiding playing hide the sausage with these two lovely ladies?


    Author's response

    A simple typo. Hermione and Luna were very very happy, and Harry very very tired.

  • Brother Z

    (#) brad 2007-06-26 12:27:12 AM

    Wow! So you're actually going to allow Snape to prank Z and Hermione in turn? Have the last laugh? Exit triumphant?


    Nice thing with Luna & Fawkes, although unexpected and unheralded.

    The stuff about the Goblins is just plain weird. Are you saying they can't perpetuate their species without breeding outside?

    What thought occured to each of the two non-traditional witches? Did I miss it in the last part of the chapter, or will it be disclosed in the next?

    Author's response

    Prank? I would think only Dumbledore would think such a thing. No, Snivellius is NOT simply planning a prank.

  • Brother Z

    (#) Anaknisatanas 2007-06-28 02:45:27 PM

    Some twists I wasn't expecting. I can't help but wonder what Snape has planned and I really want to know more about Harry's daughter. I'm also interested to see Remus' reaction to Z being Harry.
  • Brother Z

    (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-09-12 09:16:02 AM

    Interesting chapter.


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