The final chapter. Simon and Kaylee finally get some alone time after the crew settles down to sleep.
Very cute story. I liked it alot. You got Simon down perfectly, and I'm very impressed by the way you made Kaylee's voice come alive in writing. I know first hand how difficult that can be. Good job sweetie.
Very enjoyable. Each scene you wrote was perfectly believable like they really happened and just didn't have time to be filmed. You captured the family aspect of the crew very well.
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