(#) PhantomSith 2005-11-22Bravi! A Leia story, there are so few of those. Well, in the time of Vader being alive. I do hope that there will be more chapters soon, and that we will see some Vader in this.
A few suggestions though, the story needs some more discriptions. Tell the reader what things look like, and what all is really going on, then the story would be really appealing to the reader.
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