Gerard and his girlfriend Natasha, who have four kids, are making their living selling drugs on the dreary streets of New Jersey. They're miserable life just keeps getting worse as their own drug a...
(#) Rae_She_Writes 2007-07-01 01:17:20 PMWow. I am utterly speechless. You couldn't even begin to comprehend how amazing your style of writing is. Is it the way you put adjectives in all the right spots to make the characters come to life, maybe the way you take a situation that is so real and make us feel like we are inside? Whatever it is, you are one of the best authors on here and you have such a gift for writing. Amazing, this was absolutely awe-inspiring. The way you brought the reader into their lives and let them see their situation, feel their pain, makes it all the more enjoyable to indulge in reading. I feel like I know them, even though some may just be a figmet of your imagination, others people plastered on every emo teen's wall, but you captured them different. they ae in a situation that nobody wants to be in, and they try to make the best of it. And the mood of this story is so grim, but in a compelling and interesting way that makes you never want to look away. I almost started to cry when I read this, it is so emotional and just...wow. words cannot properly describe it, but I did my best. Amazing. Please update soon, as I am not sure how long i can go without being able to read this amazing story. I have a hunger to know what happens next, and mind you, that is rare in a Ficwad story by someone I don't know. But I think I am going to go read it again now. Amazing. And I am about to rate it. Inspiring.