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A Twisted Timeline
9 ReviewsMuch to his displeasure, Harry is thrown back through time into his six year old body. As a result, Harry decides to contort the timeline, purely for his own amusement.
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A Twisted Timeline
(#) homsuplow 2007-07-04 11:24:50 AM
It's a great story so far. Hope you can keep it up to the standard you started with. Since it's AU theme, a young female Zabani will be probably be incorporated or the wife of Zabini be after Harry as the next victim of the black widow character. -
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(#) crkt 2007-07-04 04:39:55 PM
it's good story i can't wait for next chapters :) -
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(#) pi3142 2007-07-12 02:04:08 AM
A really great story with lots going for it. Keep it up. -
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(#) Terdwilicker 2007-10-05 06:12:34 PM
This story is funny. I liked it alot, mainly because its a comedy Gary Stu that doesn't take itself too seriously. There are too many angsty HP fanfics and not nearly enough sarcastic stories like this one. Keep up the good work, and remember: this is comedy! -
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(#) DemonRaiy 2007-12-17 01:26:40 AM
Harry Potter as a mob boss... Now that is original (at least I think it is).
I love the humor (especially Professor Remington Q. Gillworth the Third, Esquire) and the bad-ass Harry... Keep up the good work! -
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(#) PcMan 2008-12-10 10:33:30 PM
Very good story concept, but could you please get someone with a basic understanding of english to edit for you? Your spelling and grammar choices make reading this piece quite painful.
For example you write "After stepping inside, Harry stepped inside, sealing the door shut..."
How the heck does Harry step inside, then step inside again? -
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(#) Craiger711 2010-09-11 09:15:38 PM
Wow all I can say is I laughed my ass off but thought this story was really well done, kuddos to the author... Keep writing and I'll keep reading 5stars no doubt