(#) Darkenchanter 2007-07-06I don't mind that this fic stars Pacman instead of ms Pacman. The fact that Pacman is being chased by ghosts in the first act of the game shows that he must still be making his way through the mazes as well, so your story still fits.
I especially like how eating pac-dots is now Pacmans 'job', and how you've fully embraced the games mechanics into the story instead of trying to push them to the side, it really makes the fanfic more exciting that way. Can't wait to see how you're going to handle the relationship, and especially the stalk delivering the babiesat the end. That should be interesting.
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