- haha wow...too many funny parts...
i got way absorbed in this story which is...really good...cuz i can sorta imagine my being there, haha!
belle seems a lot like you. and i love brendon's outbursts. but then again, i love everything brendon brendon brendon so whatever, right? lol.
i think you've got best comebacks with lines and stuff...they're all so perfectly written.
although i think you can (technically) work on going back to edit and stuff, i know that this is just a side thing from 'it was just for the experience' so i won't be too much of a bother about that. :)
(#) brokensoul95 2007-07-09its so funny also very good writing.
words cannot exspess how much i love this.
my favorite line: "that depends..."
"brendon dont even finish that!"lmao.
Author's response"words cannot exspess how much i love this."
you have no idea what that means to me! WOW! thank you so much. this is one of the best reviews i have ever recieved on a story. and that is my favorite line too! (i'm glad the slight pervertedness came through...Brendon seems like he would be slightly...immature about things XD woot!) Keep reading! Lifey
(#) numer45user 2007-08-23i always seem to find good stories, with a few chapters, defianately not enough to keep me satisified (though this truly is good and different from normal stories) yet...hasnt been updated for several months.
but! this is good! funny, and different, like i said before, and youre a great writer, and i wish you'd update soon!
i had been reading your other story as well, but it hasnt been updated very often, so im probably going to have to start over cause id forgotten what had happened.
both are wonderful, and i hope you update these soon!
Author's responsewow! your review made me both happy, and sad. happy for your kind words and encouragement, always appreciated. I'm so glad that you think this story is different! i've read many on here that all seem ...similar, so i'm glad that i am meeting a goal! I'm also thrilled that you've read my other story, my baby, as well :)
I will say that my great fault in writting is my slow turn around between chapters. i either have too much homework, or have writers block. I feel as if i have to have enough build up, but writting build up can be tough (sometimes you just want to spill out with the entire plot! but that cheapens the reading experience). I'm going to finish both of these! it is my goal. i'm going to plod onwards until completion. I hope you stick with the stories, readers and reviews mean the world to me.
once again, thank you for your review: it is awesome to get such insightful feedback.
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