Categories > Books > Harry Potter > Brother Z
- The last part of the story was quite good :) I especially liked the ending. I've often wondered if it wouldn't be better to teach about muggles by muggleborns or properly trained wizards as a mandatory subject. As there is a lot of things the wizards could do easily, I wondered if it wouldn't be possible for the enterprising wizards to go into the muggle world and do jobs that take longer muggle way.
Anyway, good story and good ending :) I did wonder though - the last name of the childrens weren't actually told. Everyone had TWO first names!
(#) matthiasblack 2007-07-07Kudos good doctor. Your stories never cease to amaze me and I am glad that you write them for us. I hope that you put your genius towards a new fic and wish you well in your future endeavors.
Author's responseThanks! We'll see where book 7 leaves us, and where real life leads me. Gotta get back to 'real' (or at least real life) writing soon
- Tch, Severus, leave it to you to muck up a sure thing. I thought the punishment fit the crime quite nicely and I like the way Z, and Harry, smoothly slipped into wizarding society. snicker The approach taken by Harry to keep the Wizgamot on the "straight and narrow" definitely argues that he's letting his "inner Slytherin" out more, good for him. The round-down of the story sounds precisely like what I'd expect Harry to do, striving to include as many as possible.
Bravo!! This has been a thoroughly enjoyable story.
- Shakes head.......Snape never could leave well enough alone! I think he deserved everything he got and more. I'm glad that Harry visited Tonks and Remus, after all they both cared for him deeply and would have always worried about him otherwise. As always, Dr. T you have written an excellent story! Many thanks!
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