Categories > Anime/Manga > Bleach > Unhonorable feelings.

Prologue

by kristinia 2 Reviews

Rukia's feelings towards Byakuya aren't what they seem and it is going to be hard to tell Ichigo and Renji. Her two bestfriends.

Category: Bleach - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Fantasy - Characters: Abarai Renji, Chado Yasutora, Ichimaru Gin, Inoue Orihime, Ishida Uryuu, Kuchiki Byakuya, Kuchiki Rukia, Kurosaki Ichigo, Kurosaki Isshin, Kurosaki Karin, Kurosaki Yuzu, Matsumoto Rangiku, Other - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/07/11 - Updated: 2007/07/11 - 844 words

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  • Unhonorable feelings.

    (#) youkai_girl 2007-07-11 04:44:31 PM

    A good start, though I'm not seeing anything other than sibling...affection between Byakuya and Rukia at the moment. However, I did notice one thing you might want to correct. You're having Rukia call Byakuya "nee-sama," which actually means "older sister." She should be calling him "nii-sama," which is "older brother." But it was definitely an interesting start.
  • Unhonorable feelings.

    (#) youkai_girl 2007-07-11 04:48:29 PM

    A good start, though I'm not seeing anything other than sibling...affection between Byakuya and Rukia at the moment. However, I did notice one thing you might want to correct. You're having Rukia call Byakuya "nee-sama," which actually means "older sister." She should be calling him "nii-sama," which is "older brother." But it was definitely an interesting start.

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