You can't come in, you gotta go home. You can't come in, now leave me alone.
(#) XXPoeticTragedyXX 2007-07-12 07:20:55 PMAw, poor petey!
Dude, Rachel, calm down, breath, let your man touch his own son!!!!!
I feel so bad for Patrick, I wish he had someone to hold at night. =(.
ah, Im in love with your story waaay too much lol. It's amazing, Please, please, please, double post!
Author's responseThank you very much.
I should be posting the next chapter around 5-6 reviews. Maybe. Or just by popular demand. Haha.
(#) ssketchator 2007-07-13 07:14:27 AMI knew it!
I really really really don't like Rachel. And now that PWT song is in my head. But I'm so mad at her, because she knows she's treating Pete like dirt, and she knows she's distancing him from his son, but she still blames it on him.
I was shocked shocked shocked when Pete called her Jenny.
And, on a lighter note, What did you do? Trade baby blues for wide eyed browns? was the greatest. I love that song. Good job.
- I have a half sister I never met. My dad was sort of a...man-whore and my half sister is exactly 3 months younger than me. My mom and dad didn't get divorced until I was about 5 months old, so you can do the math with that one. My half sister lives with her mom and my dad, (who I only met once when I was two years old, so I really don't remember that either), and when I was 12, she made her presence known to me in a letter she sent.
I have always been more than welcome to come visit either my father or my half sister (they live in the Bahamas, I'm in the USA), but I never have. It's not that I hold any resentment towards either of them..like Patrick says, Shit Happens haha... it's just that I don't really have a place for them in my life. My mom did a fine job on her own with no help, and yeah, there is room for a lot of improvement and in hindsight she did a lot of things wrong...but she was young and alone and she did the best she could.
It would be so amazing if this story could go on and on and I could see how Danni and Josh deal with the whole "Hey, so just to let you know, you have this whole OTHER family..." situation, (but I'm not that demanding, all good things must eventually end...as much as I don't want them to.) I've met a few others in my time with split up families like that, and the result always ends up being tragic. Mine was just something I thought about for a minute and really kind of never thought about again.
Thanks for writing a great story that I can oddly enough, relate to.
- Ok wow. That was a lot of drama in one chapter lol.
I cant believe Rachel kicked Pete out and she is seriously moody. She needs depression medicine or something to help her. Its ridiculous that she wont let Pete anywhere near the baby. I also cant believe Christina had another baby and that Patrick had those sympathy cramp, or whatever they are called. Please update soon.
(#) Emma 2007-07-14 05:20:18 AMWoah my mouth dropped when Pete said Jenny. What a bitch Rachel is being, I feel really sorry for Pete seen as he is the baby's father. I thought it was going to all work out fine but that's way to easy, hope they can manage to work it out for the baby.
That was well weird when Patrick got the cramps he must have a special power or something.