Vicky and the guys begin to deal with the past events
(#) KoKoaPuffsAtTheDisco 2007-07-13 02:20:25 PMwell, as i said your a great writer!
this story has so much emotion and detail its like i am living it.
keep up with the writing.
and I am glad brendon is alive!
Author's responsewow, thanks! Yeah, I couldn't kill him, lol!
(#) Fabnosity 2007-07-13 02:20:48 PMyay yay its been a while geets lol. omg i nearly cried when i thought he died!!! thank god he didnt now he just has to wake up!!!!! luv fabby xxxx
Author's responseaww! Well, just cos he didnt die, doesnt mean he'll wake up! mwahahaha!... laughs evily Geets xx PS, sorry I didnt update - didnt have internet :'(
(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-07-13 10:48:11 PMaw yes!!! brendon lived. now hes in a coma. right. so now brendon needs to wake up and get back with vicky. it should be a wonderful reunion with flowers and streamers...a parade...a marching band. lols.
Author's responseLmao, streamers? a parade? makes mental note lmao. We'll see what happens... MCR random appearance? FOB? 30 Seconds to Mars? Ok, I'm rambling! Thanks for the great review! Geets xx
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-07-14 12:59:27 PMHow heartfelt. I think my throat felt dry just reading how awful she felt. You did an amazing job. I can't wait until Brendon feels better. I really did love this but... please don't hate me for this. Remember how I said my mom's a surgical tech.? Well, I was curious about the whole thing, so I asked my mother about it. She said that actually you wouldn't be able to watch someone getting surgery unless it was a school's hospital and you were one of the medical students. o.O God, I feel like an ass for telling you that. But really, I think it added to the drama so it really worked. I love ya, Geets! More soon, I hope?
Author's responseAww, thankyou! And don't feel bad, or an ass, I like someone who gives me constructive criticism and such! I thought sometimes that might be possible... I will just apologise for that in my next chapter :D lol! It was hard to write and it took quite a long time, haha. More soon indeedy :D Thanks again! Geets xx