Vicky and the guys begin to deal with the past events
(#) KoKoaPuffsAtTheDisco 2007-07-13 02:20:25 PMwell, as i said your a great writer!
this story has so much emotion and detail its like i am living it.
keep up with the writing.
and I am glad brendon is alive!
Author's responsewow, thanks! Yeah, I couldn't kill him, lol!
(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-07-13 10:48:11 PMaw yes!!! brendon lived. now hes in a coma. right. so now brendon needs to wake up and get back with vicky. it should be a wonderful reunion with flowers and streamers...a parade...a marching band. lols.
Author's responseLmao, streamers? a parade? makes mental note lmao. We'll see what happens... MCR random appearance? FOB? 30 Seconds to Mars? Ok, I'm rambling! Thanks for the great review! Geets xx
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-07-14 12:59:27 PMHow heartfelt. I think my throat felt dry just reading how awful she felt. You did an amazing job. I can't wait until Brendon feels better. I really did love this but... please don't hate me for this. Remember how I said my mom's a surgical tech.? Well, I was curious about the whole thing, so I asked my mother about it. She said that actually you wouldn't be able to watch someone getting surgery unless it was a school's hospital and you were one of the medical students. o.O God, I feel like an ass for telling you that. But really, I think it added to the drama so it really worked. I love ya, Geets! More soon, I hope?
Author's responseAww, thankyou! And don't feel bad, or an ass, I like someone who gives me constructive criticism and such! I thought sometimes that might be possible... I will just apologise for that in my next chapter :D lol! It was hard to write and it took quite a long time, haha. More soon indeedy :D Thanks again! Geets xx