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REVENGE is 'sweet'
3 reviewsHarry is suffering at the Durselys. When a package arrives, a plan is formed. The Durselys would suffer for what they had done. Meant to be humorous.
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REVENGE is 'sweet'
(#) scruffy1 2007-07-14
I enjoyed this story but I would think what the Dursleys experienced was more like hallucinations than nightmares. On the whole though I found it quite pleasing.
Of course that might be because I just enjoy seeing Vernon get his.REVENGE is 'sweet'
(#) Cateagle 2007-07-14
Ah, a delightful short, but humorous, story. I presume it's a one-shot since expanding it would take quite a fair bit of elaboration.
Still a few minor corrections that hit me:
"Harry reluctantly starved ..." reads better, IMHO, as "Harry reluctantly stuffed ...". And, secondly, the Weaseley's would be asking Harry to get his trunk, not his case.
Still, 'twas a pleasureable read.REVENGE is 'sweet'
(#) jay21317 2007-08-15
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