- As a ctritic- Presantation was aweosme. Love how you write!
As a reader- Hate clifhangers (which is a good sign). Great Chapter!
As a writer- Wishing not to get into any gay/sexual crap, but then again who doesn't drool a little?
Like how you placed Ryan Ross into the story. Writing from Pete's Point Of View was a new idea, a good one.
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