- Nice!! i've been waiting forever for more of this story. I really love it. They seem really cute together. The fact that he stayed after the "D" Bomb, lol, is so adorable. I really hope they work out. i also can't wait for the more heavy stuff to happen. the 13 chapter long intro's been good, but i'm excited for the rest. Keep up the amazing work and update soon!!! xo - cassi
Author's responseThank you, Cassi. I'm pretty excited to finally be getting to the good stuff. Hopefully the updates will be plentiful.
(#) glindapsawyer 2007-07-26cute as always. however, i'm not satisfied. it was far too short. haha, just kidding. it was great. i sorta loved patrick's lil confession of being scared shitless. :D
Author's responseYa know what, Leah? I give and I give and I give and it's never enough for you! Lol, the next one will be epic...or at least longer than 1000 or so words. :)
(#) whatkatydid 2007-07-26Holy salmon on a stick! You are just getting better and better - girl, you were on fire in this chapter, I wanted to be her SO badly! She seems so flawed and yet Patrick STILL adores her...it was beautifully written, and it was SO worth the wait....I loved it. ILU2
Author's responseThere's salmon on a stick?!?!?! That's sounds pretty tasty. Now that I'm getting into the juicy part of the story, there should be more updates. But you know how it is. Writer's block is a fickle mistress who comes and goes as she pleases.
- Oh my god! Those were just the intro chapters? Wow, can hardly wait for the intense parts to start then. As usual, a beautiful update. I hope that there is more on the way soon.
Author's responseYep, those were more or less intro chapters. I was just trying to establish some history and whatnot. Wooo, I'm exhausted. More to come, my dear.
- Yay! You're back, and with more awesomeness than ever! happy dances
Hurry up, and write more, please!
Author's responseYay! I was remembered! I get nervous when I'm gone for a while, but I always get a nice welcome when I come home. I'm currently in the middle of writing a new chappy, so BEWARE!
I loved this chapter! I love how you show everyone's flaws! It makes me so happy and after being a witness to a horrible car accident this evening...I really needed it. SPANKS!
Oh and you can do what ever the hell you want when ever the hell you want as long as your updates are this spectacular!
Author's responseThank you, lovey. Sorry about the car wreck. Those are never fun. Glad I could brighten your night just a little. Now I know I have no business begging for an update...but go update that new story. I'm pretty much in love with it.
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