- i thought your story was really good.
i dont want to offend anyone so i
wont say any thing else.[im blonde so whatever comes out of my mouth usualy makes people mad:)]
but i really want to know what you think! very few things offend me!
i have to reread it now becuase i cant refiggen member what happened because i was half asleep when i read it!but iremember that it was really good!so right now i cant stay up till like 4 in the morning reading it because i have practice tomorrow 8am-4pm yup sounds like fun. but any way you have some typos, but they are still understandable, and i liked how you used your real name. most people would think that would make them seam to full of themselves. Also you have a good description of your character.
Mind you i have only gotten through 2 chapter for the second time[gggrrr:)]
PERSONAL!:what instument do you play?
Author's responsei know i have alot of spelling errors in it!! my spelling is crap-tastic!
i played the Flute!
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