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Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall

by seabatty06 3 Reviews

Andy thinks he's found the girl he's been dreaming of!

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Chapters: 21 - Published: 2007/07/28 - Updated: 2007/10/15 - 18122 words - Complete


  • Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall

    (#) Tian87 2007-10-07 09:06:19 PM

    i thought your story was really good.
    i dont want to offend anyone so i
    wont say any thing else.[im blonde so whatever comes out of my mouth usualy makes people mad:)]

    Author's response

    but i really want to know what you think! very few things offend me!
  • Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall

    (#) Tian87 2007-10-09 06:52:49 PM

    i have to reread it now becuase i cant refiggen member what happened because i was half asleep when i read it!but iremember that it was really good!so right now i cant stay up till like 4 in the morning reading it because i have practice tomorrow 8am-4pm yup sounds like fun. but any way you have some typos, but they are still understandable, and i liked how you used your real name. most people would think that would make them seam to full of themselves. Also you have a good description of your character.
    Mind you i have only gotten through 2 chapter for the second time[gggrrr:)]
    PERSONAL!:what instument do you play?

    Author's response

    i know i have alot of spelling errors in it!! my spelling is crap-tastic!

    i played the Flute!
  • Through the Eyes of the Fly on the Wall

    (#) Tian87 2007-10-09 07:09:53 PM

    'nother personal thing, what kind of band are you in?

    Author's response

    i was in the marching/concert band in HS! if that's what you're talking about?

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