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The Turtle Who Never Was

Michelangelo is shown what the world would have been like if he had never been born... but there's something terribly wrong here: Why does it look like everyone's better off without him?!

Category: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama,Humor - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] - Chapters: 6 - Published: 2007/08/16 - Updated: 2007/08/16 - 18125 words - Complete

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• The Turtle Who Never Was

  (#) Wanda 2008-03-23 04:53:39 PM

  Whoa, very brilliant story.
  
  I love how you've figured all the details out. I was especially impressed by the whole Leatherhead-Stockman-Utrom -thing.
  
  Leatherhead and Leo calling Stockman casually as 'Baxter' or some nickname would've been a nice detail though. :)
  
  The spirit being Venus was also cool twist. There's indeed a lot of symbolism in many ways. ;)
  
  
  Hopefully I remembered everything. I was so deep in the story I didn't have the patient to stop to review each chapter separately. :P

  Author's response

  Thank you for your kind words. ^_^ And you're right -- Leo and Leatherhead calling Baxter Stockman by a nickname would have been funny to include... I just didn't think of it when I wrote the story. If I had, I definitely would have. But oh well... there'll always be some missed opportunities, i guess.

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