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The Day The Magic Died

10 Years after the Voldemort is defeated the consequences of relying on one person to defeat him comes back to haunt the wizarding world.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Arthur Weasley, Ginny, Molly Weasley, Narcissa - Published: 2005/12/21 - Updated: 2005/12/22 - 565 words - Complete

Reviews

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-12-21 07:13:56 PM

  Wow. It sounds as though Harry really became a jerk over the years. What shall we see?
  
  What gets me is this: How could anyone manage to cast a single spell that could take away or block everyone's powers?
  
  This writing isn't up to your usual smoothness, Spore. You've got some word repetition going on.

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-12-21 07:15:53 PM

  Oh that explains it. You're not Nightspore. So, the word repetition about which I was speaking:
  You use the word "day" three times in the first paragraph, which is pretty short. The word "flick" or "flicked" also gets a little too much play. Etc.

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Lucia 2006-01-03 09:40:26 AM

  I loved this :)
  What has Harry been upto? naughty boy.
  I hope you'll update soon

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Ari 2006-01-05 05:49:12 PM

  Wow, such a wierd unbelivably great concept. Hmm, you should expand it with a prequel.

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) banner 2006-09-27 08:29:22 PM

  Ha!
  Revenge is sweet...

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) bloodalchemy 2006-12-17 09:56:01 PM

  very bloody funny can't stop laughing

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) Wolfric 2007-06-14 05:25:29 PM

  Love it. W.

• The Day The Magic Died

  (#) jabarber69 2007-06-14 08:29:52 PM

  Interesting story, but dont remember if this is completed or not. If not then you need to flesh it out a little like explain why or how harry got to the point he is at now!

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