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My Brother

Roy reached out his hand and rested it on the latch, but hesitated to actually open the door.

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: R - Genres: Angst - Characters: Jean Havoc,Maes Hughes,Roy Mustang - Published: 2007/08/18 - Updated: 2007/08/19 - 4030 words - Complete

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• Breaking Point

  (#) SinisterlySweet 2007-09-05 01:35:39 PM

  Fantastic story. You had me hooked from the very beginning. I imagine it's hard to write Hughes in any other way than his regular cheery disposition but what you've done so far is lovely, however disturbing. So disturbing...shiver But I really like what you've done with this. Do you have plans to write anymore?

• Breaking Point

  (#) Shanny 2009-08-10 09:55:15 PM

  That was wonderful. I couldn't stop reading once I started, the story hooked me. Wow, it would be a lot to get Roy all the way to his breaking point. But I actually felt myself getting sad reading some parts, and it takes a lot to get me emotional reading or watching anything. So very gripping story.

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