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Detachable Penis
(#) Ithilwen 2008-11-28
This is a ripoff of the song "Detatchable Penis" by King Missile. Write your own stuff, loser.Detachable Penis
(#) Del_Rion 2009-01-01
As the user "Ithilwen" pointed out, this story resembles the song "Detachable Penis" by King Missile very much.
For everyone's peace of mind, maybe you could add "insipired by" or "based on" notes to your story? It is only polite towards the makers of that song, too.Detachable Penis
(#) izziebella 2009-01-01
Hmm...I don't know, it does sound kin of familiar. I guess it might be a song. I'm going to have to agree with Del Rion. It would be better if you used "Inspired by" as a note to your story. Although I do think that Ithilwen was being a little harsh in the way she put it and it was totally uncalled for, she is right. I just looked up the song, and it does resemble the king missle song a lot. But I liked the twist you put on it, with the girl having a detatchable penis. Lol.
Izzibee
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