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~*One Love*~

There's a new girl in school named Megan who has a brother named Frank. Gerard is very in love in Megan and starts to turn bi because of her cute little brother. Mikey gets mad at Gerard for dating...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2007/08/24 - Updated: 2007/08/25 - 664 words

Reviews

• ~*One Love*~

  (#) MusicLove 2007-08-25 02:43:56 AM

  Seeing as though you reviewed mine, i'll review yours ^.^
  This is an awesome start. I'd be amazing if you carried it on because its something a bit different to all the other Frerard's I've seen. Keep up the good work ^.^

• ~*One Love*~

  (#) WynonaKing90 2007-08-26 12:20:45 AM

  i like the story line.
  i think its awesome and original,
  but i must say,
  the dialouge is completely unrealistic.
  i mean, in the begening, megan hugs gerard after saying two sentences to him??
  and then frank HAS to mention how old his sister is turning to a complete stranger?
  then, he just randomly asks 'whats your name?'.
  no one in real life would ever do all those things, so it makes it hard to believe.
  
  i dont mean this as an insult, but are you in 6th grade? im just wondering cause your writting level seems to be in about that age range.

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