Like many folks, including a lot of fanfic writers, I loved Deathly Hallows but felt let down by the Epilogue. I just couldn't see how JKR got from the end of the battle to 19 years later. Too ma...
Very good. Keep up the good work!
I'd like to see more of these snippets! I'm not a Harry/Ginny fan but you've portrayed them well here. Though we need more Ron and a more realistic Ron at that if this goes on!
I enjoyed your 'addition' to the epilogue in Book 7. Unfortunately, I still can't see Harry with the obsessive fan girl that Ginny was throughout the books. And the names of the kids...? Albus Severus UGH!.
I liked it -- it's good to see that Harry has come to realise that people are not either black or white, Albus Dumbledore for one (despite his name) is quite grey, just as Hermione pointed out.
I'd want to be there when Hermione springs going back to Howarts on Ron too!! Great idea for a biography of Dumbledore!! :-D
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