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Speaking in Tongues

by Ikonopeiston 1 Reviews

A visit to an unfamiliar venue.

Category: Humor - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2005/05/09 - Updated: 2005/05/09 - 1491 words - Complete

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  • Speaking in Tongues

    (#) Ithilwen 2005-11-27 07:12:20 AM

    Square dancing at the YMCA? That says a lot.

    No one believes in atheists? Well I guess that would give them a taste of their own medicine if they really existed.

    This piece is more quirky than funny, and most of the quirk is in the beginning, and the ending is a bit disappointing. I was expecting it to come together a bit more.

    BEWARE: NITPICKING AHEAD!

    This fic seems a bit hyphen-happy. "Lifestyle" is one word. "Reincarnation" is one word. "Dried apple" is two words when used as a noun, but if you'd used it as an adjective, as in "a dried-apple face," then it would have worked..

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