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Doors and stairs

by darkviolet 5 Reviews

I redefine idiotism.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2007/09/20 - Updated: 2007/09/20 - 1223 words - Complete

Reviews

  • you can keep my brother

    (#) hopeanne 2007-09-21 06:23:21 AM

    Ugh! I hate when you do this!! Starting mid-scene like that!!! What the f*ck was sky doing out drinking with COLE!!! I mean really!~ Gee isnt home and she out getting smashed with Cole?! ugh... no I mean ugrrrrh. Her 'thoughts' if thats what you could even call them, they were funny but I was soooo pissed over the fact that she was out with Cole that I couldnt enjoy them!
    Next chap better be some kinda explanation...=P
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) hopeanne 2007-09-21 06:26:55 AM

    Ugh! I hate when you do this!! Starting mid-scene like that!!! What the f*ck was sky doing out drinking with COLE!!! I mean really!~ Gee isnt home and she out getting smashed with Cole?! ugh... no I mean ugrrrrh. Her 'thoughts' if thats what you could even call them, they were funny but I was soooo pissed over the fact that she was out with Cole that I couldnt enjoy them!
    Next chap better be some kinda explanation...=P
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) _cranium_ 2007-09-25 01:58:58 PM

    her drunker thoughts were so funny and random, kinda remindes me of my brother (?) hah well anyway, i was a little confused too about the whole Cole thing but i'm pretty sure we'll find out more in the next chapter (will we?)
    however.. great job girl
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) _cranium_ 2007-09-25 02:07:29 PM

    oh and i just have to add this, i do understand completely that there's no explanation for her going out drinking with cole in "this chapter", cause the story is written in "her point of view", she was wasted, and when you're wasted you don't think about how you got to the situation you're now in or what happened 5 hours or 5 minutes ago. either you don't give a fuck or don't remember, so even though it was confusing i think it was also "natural" and "realistic". it would be a different case if the story was written in someone elses point of view but it's not =)=) excuse me for writing such a novel here, but i just had to point that out=)

    Author's response

    lol does your brother afraid he's head isn't connecting to his face when he's drunk too? anyway i agree when you're out of it you don't really care why and where are you but the Cole thing would probably be explained in the next chapter since it's kinda important...anyway thanx for commenting, review were being slow lately...
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) rocker4lifeSAM 2008-06-08 01:00:15 AM

    ok so..
    first time ive reviewed.
    got to say, your story is absolutely exccelent.
    but i hope that skyler and gerards relationship get a bit better.???

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