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Trying not to burst into flames

by Jurhael 1 Reviews

ShuyinxLenne. Lenne tells Shuyin to flee, but he has other plans.

Category: Final Fantasy X-2 - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama - Characters:  Lenne, Shuyin - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2005/05/09 - Updated: 2005/05/09 - 1449 words

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  • Ignite

    (#) helluin 2006-11-10 07:19:41 PM

    Very gripping and well-written, bringing to life a time and characters we don't see very often.

    One thing to ponder, although this is a finished piece: while Zanarkand was obviously highly-advanced, it probably didn't have quite the same technology we do. I'm guessing they may have used spheres for communication even back then, since a few were found from that long ago. I found the reference to "phone" and "car keys" a tiny bit jarring.

    "I don’t need a thousand words. I only need three." -- really great exchange. :)

    Author's response

    I included some of the more "Earthly" technologies because I remembered seeing the roads in a ruined Zanarkand and I figured that it would make sense if cars were there. As for phones, heh, I forgot about the comm spheres. I thought those were more recent than Zanarkand and used as a replacement for phones. Thank you for your review! :D

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