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Chapter 3

by Respicefinem08 3 Reviews

When Akihito just can't figure Asami out, he grows tired of the status quo and slips away from Asami's grasp.

Category: Viewfinder - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst,Romance - Characters: Asami,Takaba - Published: 2007/09/23 - Updated: 2007/09/23 - 4181 words - Complete

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  • Nostalgia

    (#) Terrenea 2007-09-29 11:58:47 AM

    I'm usually against OCs when they become involved intimatly with the headcharacter (Aki), but Gyles kinda grew on me; towards the end I felt a little sorry for him.

    However, sometimes the story seemed a little too long/detailed, but to be honest I'm tired at the moment so I can't say that the detailness was good or bad for the story.

    Anyway, it was a enjoyable story and quite the original in my POV. ^^

    Author's response

    Thank you very much for the Review. The story indeed may have seemed a bit detailed because 1. it's just the way I write (probably should iron this out) and 2. it was the second fic I ever wrote. I appreciate you reading them and taking the time to comment. Really does mean a lot to me! :)
    Hugs & Kisses

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