You must be Alex and Rachel. I'm your dad...
(#) GoogleGeek 2007-09-24 08:06:55 PMThis was good. My favorite part was:
"Maybe she was a prostitute?" He suggested.
I'd like to see more of those few surprises you mentioned so please keep on writing.
Author's responseHa ha, yeah my fav part to. I'll hopfully update by the end of the week. Thanks! :)
GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD :)
update soon, and O.M.G!
can't wait for the surprises, and
I like it how it is Mikey who is the
Author's responseI'm actually writing stories about all the band members having kids, cause there are 'way' too many Gerard ones (okay I'll stop with the bad puns, lol) But anyway, thanks! :)
I'd like you to update quicker.
please... been waiting ):
I wonna se Mikey as a daddy..!!!
update soon (PLEASE)
i'll like give you free comp chocolate.
hahaha ignore that that. random...
Author's response~points behind clutsy~ look! it's a miarcle! I actually updated! ~slaps cheek~
XD ignore that to... very random. But yeah, It's updated. Sorry I didn't update sooner... big writers block. Hopefully the next one will be up sooner. =D
- since you wanna know what we thought...
i would say that it was lacking details
but it really had a huge mental impact on me so keep writing...
i love it when you stop to the good parts...
Author's responseYou know what? I actually agree with you! I think I'm a decent writer but I'm only a beginner so, I'm not that good and alot of the time I don't know what details to put in... lol.
But anyway, thanks for the review! =)