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GPS.

by darkviolet 3 Reviews

The agony of driving and cats...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2007/09/26 - Updated: 2007/09/26 - 2410 words - Complete

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  • you can keep my brother

    (#) MCR_music_mad_girl 2007-09-27 12:10:42 AM

    oooh kinky!
    i like it !! =]
    more soon please !! =]

    Author's response

    I'm really glad you liked it! usually my sex scenes are all blah...that's why there's not many of them...
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) winnie_55 2007-09-27 05:37:37 AM

    I loved this update, the argument they had about driving was funny. The sex scene was hot! lol. not uncomfortable at all!

    Author's response

    oohh i just realized that i encouraged the stereotype that girls can't drive :( well what i really meant is that sky can't drive and she's just one girl...i know a lot girls who drive very well...umm..yes...girl power!! glad you liked it!
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) hopeanne 2007-09-28 05:03:14 AM

    Aw that last chap put you over 100 thousand words!~ Congrats! I think 100 is considered a novel... Im not sure...=/
    Anyways. This site is driving me mad. I cant seem to get any alerts anymore and I just typed a whole big thing and clicked and it went back to the front page! =(
    So im trying again...But now I forgot what I said.. Oh uhhh I liked how he knew exactly how to push her buttons. And I could totally sympathize with the whole being picked on for how you drive or should I say how you not drive kinda thing... Sometimes its just easier to let the guy drive... poor sky though. And your closing scene... I... Im just gonna send you a email on that one...

    Author's response

    I'm a shitty driver too, i just don't like it unless the road is empty so... yeah...i don't know about these sex scene, I'm really discouraged to write them, i don't think I'd write them anymore..maybe just the 4play, glad you liked the rest of the chap though...
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) bindie611 2007-09-28 06:37:25 AM

    Just read the whole story, and I thought it was really funny. For some reason, I like the really insane scenes better than all the drama, though I suppose the drama's fine if it makes a point. Guess what I'm trying to say is that humour is a really strong point for you. So please, please, put some more! And keep updating - personally I think it's great!

    Author's response

    oh wow you read all the...how many chapters it is? 74? something like that? i don't remember...anyway, i appreciate the effort..as for the drama vs. comedy, I'm really trying to balance the two out...i mean, if it's just comedy, it gets annoying after a while and if it's just drama, you'd get sick of that too so I'm trying to put equal amount of both...but I'll take that to heart and see where i can't put more comedy. thanks for the feedback!

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