(#) armourdude 2006-03-13Ok I am going to hate to say this. But this read little like a cross between Harry Potter and X-men. Sort of in a way.
The story was very good and original. The lost past made it intriging. The Connection to contmpory events made this easier to relate too. Oh those battle scenes! Wow I wish I could write battle scenes like that. But sadly I did not like the ending very much. Thats only my personal opinion. It is just me but that subject matter is not something I am comfortable with. But I did not judge the whole story on the one thing I had a problem with. Over all it was a good story and I gave it a positive rating point too.
- I thought it was really good. I'm not finished reading it, still am reading it, I'm half way through it. I hate to say that it reminds me a bit of C.S.I
I keep seeing the character's talking back and forth to each other, and I'm watching the show in my head. I don't know any C.S.I shows but I have heard of a few. Anyways, it is really good though and if it really is Original I'm very impressed. I don't know what else to say.
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