(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-09-27Ugh. I hate this site! I cant seem to get any kinda story alerts and it keeps bumping me out! =(
Anyway another great chapter.
Very intense! Kinda sci-fi scary.
You described it so well I actually felt Franks fear and pain. I mean I know hes a vampire but he can still get freaked out.
And I loved that bit about him forgeting that he didnt have to breath. Cause to like a 3rd person observer it might look like hes super smart and did it intentionally to 'escape' the green goo death tank (lol) but we know hes still the same scared teenager deep down inside. Excellent character insight there...
And for the record I knew Frank wasnt dead... Unless this is some kinda horrible time twisting flashback... I just dont trust you... =)
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