Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > My Warped Tour '05 Romance

Pomona, California

by OhSoIntricateLie 3 Reviews

Please review, they inspire meh muse :]

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG - Genres: Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2007/10/19 - Updated: 2007/10/19 - 644 words - Complete

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  • My Warped Tour '05 Romance

    (#) pyrotechnicist 2007-10-20 03:38:51 AM

    this is good
    well sorta
    so far cliche but im clinging to the hope that it'll get interesting or at least fluffy
    so far the character base is good
    and the scene is set for an interesting fic
    cant wait to see what happens
    update soon
    xoxox

    Author's response

    Thank you for reviewing!
    Cliche how?
    Give another chapter or so and we'll start seeing some fluff!
  • My Warped Tour '05 Romance

    (#) Lizzard 2007-10-20 11:36:57 AM

    “Hey Marty, can I drive?”
    Everyone else’s response?

    “NO!”

    Awesome. I wouldn't let someone non-experienced with a bus drive, either. This story is interesting, andI want to see where you're going with it.

    The best part was that on the bottom of the page the story was on, there was an ad for something to stop snoring.

    Author's response

    Thanks for the review!
    Yeah, I had to put the "Can I drive" in there, it just sounded right. LOL

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