(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-10-20this is good
so far cliche but im clinging to the hope that it'll get interesting or at least fluffy
so far the character base is good
and the scene is set for an interesting fic
cant wait to see what happens
Author's responseThank you for reviewing!
Give another chapter or so and we'll start seeing some fluff!
- “Hey Marty, can I drive?”
Everyone else’s response?
Awesome. I wouldn't let someone non-experienced with a bus drive, either. This story is interesting, andI want to see where you're going with it.
The best part was that on the bottom of the page the story was on, there was an ad for something to stop snoring.
Author's responseThanks for the review!
Yeah, I had to put the "Can I drive" in there, it just sounded right. LOL
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