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The Runaway Bride

The Semiclassic 'everyone has been lying to Harry about everything' plot. Very AU. Bashing of pretty much everyone. Mind Control Sex. Language. Dumbledore decides the Old Families won't tolerate th...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Warnings: [V] [X] [R] [?] - Published: 2007/10/20 - Updated: 2007/10/21 - 1237 words - Complete

Reviews

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) DrT 2007-10-21 03:50:47 AM

  Interesting take of Jbern's strawberry love potion. Harry and Hermione working together should be fun
  
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  Author's response

  Yeah. I was really embarrassed when it was pointed out where I had gotten that aspect of the story. I sent him an apology for the use of his concept. I guess that's the problem with reading lots of fics, you start using ideas you read without realizing it...

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) Cateagle 2007-10-21 01:01:49 PM

  Heh, definitely a good, action-filled start that catches the reader's interest and attention. It should be interesting to watch the two of them work through the potions and then get together to deal with the situation. Given that he seems to have a genius for "muddling through" and that she's rather learned and powerful, it should be interesting, to say the least.

  Author's response

  That's pretty much how I see Hermione. She sees a problem, projects several possible solutions, selects the optimal response and acts upon it.
  
  Harry says, "Hey there's a problem.

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) Rocky235 2007-11-03 09:12:01 PM

  I like both Hermione and Ginny, but I guess I'd better start liking Hermione more.
  
  This looks like a fun, well, for the reader, story.

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-05-06 07:15:43 AM

  Good start, I have read this before and reviewed but it doesn't show. Oh well, try try again.
  
  gunny

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