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• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) DrT 2007-10-21

  Did you like the show 'Hermione's Head' when it was on? (characters talking inside the main character's head, if you aren't familiar with it)
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Yes. I was a huge fan of that show. My multiple selves was sort of a tribute to it.

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) Cateagle 2007-10-21

  chuckle Going for membership in the "mile-high club" are they? Be more challenging to try it on a broom. In any case, I like how things are coming together here as things start to form up.
  
  It appears Albus is finding events not to his liking, given the teams Harry sent into action in the last chapter and his withdrawls, I suspect he's going to be even less pleased with immediate future events. I don't think Ron nor Ginny are going to like things being taken out of their control, either. Methinks Ginny really needs to learn more basic opsec, an unprotected diary is just so not done.
  
  What's interesting is to watch how Hermione's parents are coming to support them as a coupld in 'most anyway they can.
  
  Luna is, as always, Luna and looks to have a better knowledge of things than most would credit. What will be interesting to see is where the choices now being made prune the possible events tree, I'd wager it's going to get -very- interesting soon.

  Author's response

  If the scene in the head wasn't clear, Hermione left after she told him she needed him... The rest was just the happy ramblings of Harry's inner perv.
  
  Few of the Hogwarts conspirators are destined to be happy people...
  
  I'm trying desperately to avoid the "Hermione's Parents Love Harry So Much that Not Only Do they want Harry to Take Hermione's Virginity, They want to hold his cloak while he's doing it" cliche. Andy is less than thrilled, and since he can't get his hands on Ron, Harry will do in a pinch... Still it's hard not to like someone who hands you 3million pounds and tells you to take your little girl and head for the hills...
  
  Luna is,well Luna. She is, to my mind the most sane of the cast.

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) banner 2008-01-13

  There are no good guys in this mess. There are only evil bastards, less evil bastards and innocents."
  Wonderful line. I decided to reread this from the beginning, and I'm having a wonderful time with it.

  Author's response

  - Thank you.

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) guamja 2008-04-23

  Nice Luna....seeing multiple pathways of fate would make one a little strange..

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-05-06

  Very good chapter. I do hope Luna has a very happy and good time in this story.
  
  gunny

• The Acts Of Betrayal

  (#) spaceodin 2009-10-08

  this story makes me sad to the point of my chest hurting. and very few things do that, two of them was the ending of death note. and the entire code geass series, ' i'm a sad panda.'

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