- The short chapters were annoying, the story was great. The concepts and execution were original, the funny parts really were, and the touching parts weren't overdone. Even the bad jokes were good. Denise, really...
Anyhow, good work. I'm sure I'll enjoy your other stuff, too.
Author's responseHey now, Denise is a great name... It's Deuncles you've got to look out for.
(#) dialectically_yours1 2007-12-17I've ended up reading quite a few of your stories now, but THIS ONE had me rolling with laughter at certain points. THANK YOU for this!
There's a bit too much 'adult' humor to let my kids read this, which is a shame, but I will say the boys have picked up "Your mother sells at cost," as an insult between them.
In my own defense: I DO NOT! (roflm*o!)
Actually, this shows that the whole family are becoming fans of your work, so KEEP WRITING.
Author's response- You should never allow any child to read any of my drek, that would surely amount to child abuse.
- It seemed to me that in a mercantile culture like the Goblins (at least how they are routinely portrayed in fanon, as opposed to the psychotic thieves of the last book of canon) accusing one's mother of selling at cost would be the height of insults.
- Thank you for your kind words.
(#) snitchfinder27 2008-04-14OMG that was awesome. I did not see that coming. I was actually a little peeved that you killed Harry off but that twist at the end made me lose it. Congratulations on writing a terrific story.
Author's response- I'm told a lot of people stopped reading when Harry died... Personally I thought I telegraphed the ending from the time Luna first mentioned it...
(#) AKindOfMagic78 2009-07-17-looking at your response above- At exactly this point I knew the outcome of the story - but I had to know, HOW! -grin-
Well, you don't like Ginny. I like her. You call her a little fan bitch (or so). I agree. Would you agree that nearly every human being after ten years of brainwash is "in the line"? Especially if it starts after not a quarter year of the birth...? For this I blame Molly! For there are so many Independent!Harry-stories where are the Independent!Ginny-stories? I have read one (I think, in German and incomplete) where she casts herself out of the Weasley-family (with an ancient and, of course, quite messy ritual) after Molly would sent her to a proper-witches-boarding-school in France far away from her Harry. Means, she is only named Ginevra. Not more. In all records (Hogwarts, Gringotts etc. pp.)!
New ideas? I hope so. 'Cause I like your writing-style pretty much!
PS: Y'know - 2nd foreign language and so...
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