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The Beginning

by writing_maniac1321 3 Reviews

Combing her matted hair with his fingers he looked at her tear stained face and once again saw her smiling; now he knew he wasn’t imagining it, she had a broken smile.

Category: Drama - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!] [V] - Published: 2007/10/17 - Updated: 2007/10/24 - 1760 words

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  • Broken Smiles

    (#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2007-10-19 11:45:54 AM

    Awe. This is too sweet
  • Broken Smiles

    (#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2007-10-19 07:44:39 PM

    Okay, apparently my whole review didn't show up for some odd reason. I guess FicWad is starting to hate me. Anyway, if this one doesn't show up, I'm terribly sorry. Anywho, I thought your descriptions were wonderful and the way you blended the words together was amazing. It has very intricate details and the sentences flow nicely. So favoriting this. I'd like to read more from you. Keep writing, love.

    Author's response

    Thank you so much (I'm working on the next chapter so I'll post that next week sometime)

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