(#) dadscooking 2007-11-02Absolutely great story. I like the slow build and character development of Harry/Susan/Hermione. I don't know where this is going but I can't wait to get there.
One of the best reads in a long time.
Author's responseOh stop, you're making me blush.
(#) Sksniper128 2007-11-26Is it going to be Harry/Fleur or something else? Doesn't have to be just asking.
Author's response- It started out intended to be Harry/Hermione. The actors didn't care about my intentions and ad libbed their way into Harry/Susan Bones...
- A wonderful story. A beautiful (if you could call it that) dystopia you constructed.
The humanity of your characters, good and bad is also so well portrayed.
Most definitely one of the best works of fanfiction i've encountered.
Author's response- Thanks, though I must admit to being a bit disturbed by the images of this world my sick imagination has come up with.
- I like this story!
It's kind of dark and all that, but once things started to move, I couldn't stop reading...
I have to say that I really though that Tonks would be treated as Fleur (a metamorphmagus slave must be as good for social advancement in this world as a Veela slave!
I hope you will update soon!
(#) TheResident 2010-08-07Thank you for an interesting and original (to me) story. I like the HP/SB pairing and have only seldom seen it. Pairings other than HP/HG and HP/GW have been done to death. (I still prefer HP/HG over HP/GW). Keep on writing, you're good at it.
- Just found this story and read it in one go!
I noticed that you started with "Chapter 7" and I assume that the first six chapters are the ones you found revolting. Good decision to omit them, then.
Great twist on the "Final Battle" bit. So many authors either cop out or fall on their own swords when they reach this part. Your ending was brilliant and believable, as was your "epilogue".
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