Harry's world ends as everyone he loves is killed when the Death Eaters attack Bill and Fleur's wedding. Is there such a thing as a Second Chance? Various Ships. Dark world, Sexual situations, Slav...
(#) dadscooking 2007-11-02 10:55:27 AMAbsolutely great story. I like the slow build and character development of Harry/Susan/Hermione. I don't know where this is going but I can't wait to get there.
One of the best reads in a long time.
Author's responseOh stop, you're making me blush.
(#) rdgale2000 2007-11-02 03:09:25 PMOh, I love it! I look forward to seeing Harry take care of his little group in the coming chapters.
Too bad for Tonks and Shack, but not everyone can be redeemed.
I look forward to your next chapter
Author's responseWorking on it.
(#) Sksniper128 2007-11-26 05:55:47 AMIs it going to be Harry/Fleur or something else? Doesn't have to be just asking.
Author's response- It started out intended to be Harry/Hermione. The actors didn't care about my intentions and ad libbed their way into Harry/Susan Bones...
- A wonderful story. A beautiful (if you could call it that) dystopia you constructed.
The humanity of your characters, good and bad is also so well portrayed.
Most definitely one of the best works of fanfiction i've encountered.
Author's response- Thanks, though I must admit to being a bit disturbed by the images of this world my sick imagination has come up with.
- I like this story!
It's kind of dark and all that, but once things started to move, I couldn't stop reading...
I have to say that I really though that Tonks would be treated as Fleur (a metamorphmagus slave must be as good for social advancement in this world as a Veela slave!
I hope you will update soon!
(#) TheResident 2010-08-07 01:58:05 AMThank you for an interesting and original (to me) story. I like the HP/SB pairing and have only seldom seen it. Pairings other than HP/HG and HP/GW have been done to death. (I still prefer HP/HG over HP/GW). Keep on writing, you're good at it.