This is a standalone I did for an english hand-in, but I figured I'd post it here. It's about Gerard, Frank and Bob, anyways.
(#) BlacknWhiteRainbow 2007-11-05 06:20:10 PMI like the plot, it's original.
He kills Bob and Frank.
Great. Saddish,but I'm kinda sadistic, so I liked it.
What did your teacher think of it?
Author's responseThank you, it means a lot to me that you're even bothering to review.
I didn't get it back from my teacher yet, but when I do, I'll post the grade I got here!
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-11-07 10:40:57 AMI liked it, too! It was a good idea and it was really well written!
I like how you didn't actually tell us what happens next, but we can imagine!
Lol, I really liked it, anyway!
Author's responseAw, thank you!
Haha yeah, imagination's a very good friend of mine.
And thanks for bothering to comment. Not a lot of people do...
- Wow...Gerard sounds fucking evil.
It's hard to imagine, but hey, great story.
Very cool plot...Frank and Bob dying...not cool like I'd want that to happen...but y'know.
And you know what? I really like the idea of Frank and Bob, instead of the over used "Frerard" or even "Frikey"
Awesome job. And I loved your "Noise and Kisses" story over in The Used section as well.
Author's responseHaha, thanks. Yeah.. Frerard is still hot, but it's getting kinda old...
Thank you, I had a lot of fun writing "Noise and Kisses" ^^