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Shoki

by Plshade 7 Reviews

The gang gathers together at the Magic Box after an eventful night, during which Giles comes across an interesting tidbit of information. (Complete)

Category: Buffy the Vampire Slayer - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters: Anya, Buffy, Dawn, Giles, Riley, Tara, Willow, Xander - Published: 2005/05/09 - Updated: 2005/05/10 - 3145 words - Complete

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  • Shoki

    (#) Stormkpr 2005-05-17 08:23:32 PM

    I thought this was good. You really captured the dialog well; the words sounded just like what the characters from the show would actually say.

    Author's response

    Thanks. I had hoped to capture the playful bantering between everyone from the earlier seasons.
  • Shoki

    (#) Ithilwen 2005-11-30 06:39:36 PM

    Ah, Shoki it to me.

    I find it a bit ironic that your spoiler warning contains a spoiler. You might want to look into that.

    Clunky in places, but you seem to have a lot of their key phrases down. Anya in particular seems nicely IC.

    You repeat yourself a little bit. "Dark look," "large sword" and "folklore" all happen more than once, and that's not good for a 'fic this length. Also, referring to "the brunette" was a bit vague. The word usually refers to a female, so I was wondering whether you meant Anya or someone.

    I actually like the idea of Xander as a regular guy with no powers. I find that it highlights his courage. However, this was an interesting take.
  • Shoki

    (#) darkflame1516 2006-03-06 10:41:48 PM

    wow. this was very interesting. i liked the myth, most people wouldnt see Xander as a "demon queller". i think that u should do a sequel or followup on this, simply because it is such an original idea. i also thought it was great how everyone seemed well in character. i felt as if this was a real episode. way to go, i'm impressed.
  • Shoki

    (#) animesam 2006-09-05 01:56:00 AM

    a nice read funny I lik to see more
  • Shoki

    (#) Vlad_the_Impish 2008-07-07 01:25:04 PM

    A lovely story, showing the family dynamic between the group. Well done.

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