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Shoki

The gang gathers together at the Magic Box after an eventful night, during which Giles comes across an interesting tidbit of information. (Complete)

Category: Buffy the Vampire Slayer - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters: Anya, Buffy, Dawn, Giles, Riley, Tara, Willow, Xander - Published: 2005/05/09 - Updated: 2005/05/10 - 3145 words - Complete

Reviews

• Shoki

  (#) W00KIE 2005-05-10 04:46:16 AM

  Hehe, nice one. Does that myth actually exist? And, more importantly, is anything going to come of this? Even just some further snippets of Shoki fopping someone would be nice.

  Author's response

  Thanks. Shoki is an actual myth that I read about in a book about spirits and ghosts. As for more, at the time that I wrote this I wasn't planning to take it any further but recently, I got an idea or two for a possible follow up.

• Shoki

  (#) Stormkpr 2005-05-17 08:23:32 PM

  I thought this was good. You really captured the dialog well; the words sounded just like what the characters from the show would actually say.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I had hoped to capture the playful bantering between everyone from the earlier seasons.

• Shoki

  (#) Suzuka Blade 2005-09-26 11:55:54 AM

  That was awesome! please continue the story.
  hands the writer a large slab of chocolate in an attempt to bribe the writer to do a sequal
  Enjoy!

• Shoki

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-11-30 06:39:36 PM

  Ah, Shoki it to me.
  
  I find it a bit ironic that your spoiler warning contains a spoiler. You might want to look into that.
  
  Clunky in places, but you seem to have a lot of their key phrases down. Anya in particular seems nicely IC.
  
  You repeat yourself a little bit. "Dark look," "large sword" and "folklore" all happen more than once, and that's not good for a 'fic this length. Also, referring to "the brunette" was a bit vague. The word usually refers to a female, so I was wondering whether you meant Anya or someone.
  
  I actually like the idea of Xander as a regular guy with no powers. I find that it highlights his courage. However, this was an interesting take.

• Shoki

  (#) darkflame1516 2006-03-06 10:41:48 PM

  wow. this was very interesting. i liked the myth, most people wouldnt see Xander as a "demon queller". i think that u should do a sequel or followup on this, simply because it is such an original idea. i also thought it was great how everyone seemed well in character. i felt as if this was a real episode. way to go, i'm impressed.

• Shoki

  (#) animesam 2006-09-05 01:56:00 AM

  a nice read funny I lik to see more

• Shoki

  (#) Vlad_the_Impish 2008-07-07 01:25:04 PM

  A lovely story, showing the family dynamic between the group. Well done.

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