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Hurt me.

by darkviolet 3 Reviews

Not what you expected...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2007/11/13 - Updated: 2007/11/13 - 1128 words - Complete

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  • you can keep my brother

    (#) bindie611 2007-11-14 04:02:09 AM

    this is creepy-eepy. But I guess I like it! Cause I like everything else. Please don't make something scary next.

    Author's response

    i'm sorry it was unpleasant for you, i did rate it PG 13 but it's just like one chapter, the rest of the story isn't really graphic :)
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) hopeanne 2007-11-14 06:38:29 AM

    I thought I reviewed this but either I didnt click or it disappeared or what.
    But I am at a loss for words. This was such an improvement over your last 'smexxi' scene. I thought it was hot. But story line wise Im like WTF!!
    Is she dreaming? flashback? what???
    Ugh, its the worst kinda cliffhanger!!!
    Thats like the thing I hate/love about your story is theres no time line!
    But just the fact that it involves someone other then Gee worries me. Like if shes dreaming of someone else thats not good. Shes suppose to be dreaming of Gee. And if its a flashback- fuck. She cheated on Gee? Or she is cheating on Gee?
    Im worried.
    Update.
    And make it logical cause I swear if you blow over this with out an explanation I will hurt you...
    xoxo

    Author's response

    runs away and hides
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) _cranium_ 2007-11-14 08:04:58 AM

    ok you have to update really soon woman cause it looks like i'm not the only one who's confused.
    however this chapter was excellent.
    it screams talent.
    but yeah, the next chapter better have an explanation =]
    the end gave me the feeling that she was dreaming and if so i as sure as hell hope she was having a nightmare, not a fantasy type of thing... great job!

    Author's response

    wow thank you! i'm pretty much speechless...
    but anyway you were right, it was a dream.
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) winnie_55 2007-11-14 01:10:07 PM

    Yeah, I'm confused too! I really hope that was a dream, not a flashback. Even though Sky dream cheating on Gerard is just as bad! Your writing is fantastic. This story is so good and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's response

    do you think it's as bad? like her dreaming is as bad as actually cheating? i'm a little torn but i don't think it's as bad...it's not good but not as bad..
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) winnie_55 2007-11-17 06:56:10 AM

    No, you're right, it is bad, but not as bad! Glad it was just a dream too!

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