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Christina Ricci & Bruce.

by darkviolet 3 Reviews

I know I can't hide forever but I can try!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2007/11/16 - Updated: 2007/11/16 - 1365 words - Complete

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  • you can keep my brother

    (#) bindie611 2007-11-16 04:37:34 PM

    Ahahaahahhahahahahahahahahahahah that was sooo funny. I'd have copy pasted some bits, but i totally forgot to - it's just like "so that's why he was so forgiving!" and "So now you can only fuck Bruce? Shut up you fucked that Christina chick" ahaahahaha you totally rule!! I laughed so hard. And then Gerard is casting Bruce dark looks. Mahahhaahhahaah

    MORE!! PLEASE!!

    Author's response

    lol i'm glad you enjoyed it and found it funny...lately my comedy skills aren't all that so i'm pleased that i got you laughing!
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) winnie_55 2007-11-17 07:48:07 AM

    Sky was brave to tell Gerard, is Gerard as ok about it as he's trying to appear? Cos the glaring at Bruce makes me think he's kinda upset. He must be a bit jealous, there's a difference between him having a dream about someone unattainable like Christina Ricci and Sky dreaming about his manager! Anyway, I loved this chapter, I am becoming a bit obsessed! lol.

    Author's response

    lol i'm welcoming any kind of obsession concerning the story so go ahead...but yeah you touched a point there, gerard isn't as cool as he seems about it, do you have any ideas how i can put his uncoolness about it in the story? cause i wanna go there but i have no idea how...well i have a few but they seem kinda blah to me...
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) _cranium_ 2007-11-17 09:49:18 AM

    hahahah i loved it, i read it three times and not cause i'd have a hard time understanding english=) this chapter rocked. i think it was awesome that skyler told gerard about it, and gerard didn't get all upset or anything cause if he had then i doubt skyler would've had the courage to tell him stuff again.. skyler shouldn't feel bad about it really, i'm very interested in 'analyzing' dreams and almost every book i found at the local library said it was a good sign. if you cheat on someone you love in your dream, you would never really do it in real life. haha and yes, i did check that. i just had to. i guess i'm addicted or something=)

    Author's response

    oh my god! you actually went and checked because of the story?? that's so awesome!!!
    just so so so awesome! i can't put enough 'so's to express the awesomeness of it!!!
    and that's a cool hobby you have there! do you like analyze people's dreams or just read stuff about it?
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) hopeanne 2007-11-24 07:41:33 AM

    Okay it is impossible to make Gerard 'uncool' so just stop right there. But I totally agree with the liking the fact that gerard isnt okay with the thought of Sky dreaming of Bruce. It'd be weird if he was. But this was a good chap. Im a little disappointed it wasnt like a bigger mess though. Isnt that fucked up though? I mean I say I want them to be happy and then I complain theres not enough drama! lol. But I dont know. You can always save the tension that was just created and use it later. Like if Bruce and sky get caught in a comprimising situation G will automatically assume the worst cause this idea was planted in his head now...
    But you know what bothers me the most is that that last chapter was soooo good. Like there was so much heat between Bruce and Sky and yes I know it was a dream but it leaves me wondering if its like.
    Like okay there was more heat between them then there ever was between G and Sky and Im not sure if its cause youre writing is improving sooo much or if its story line related.

    Author's response

    i think it's related to my writing abilities...you know my sex scene sucks and this one happened to be an OK one...but anyway, it's got nothing to do with the relationship.
  • you can keep my brother

    (#) winnie_55 2007-11-26 11:55:30 AM

    Hmm...have been thinking hard about any ideas, but the truth is, no idea I could ever come up with would be good enough for your story! You write far too well! I'm off to read the new updates now. :-)

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