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I Wont Forget You

When Edmund is captured and imprisoned by the White Witch, he finds himself cast under the spell of the mysterious Phantasma.

Category: Chronicles of Narnia - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/01/15 - Updated: 2006/01/16 - 945 words - Complete

Reviews

• I Wont Forget You

  (#) Elvenesse 2006-02-15 12:09:19 PM

  This was an interesting story! I noticed a few typos though - most noticeably in the story title. There are also inconsistencies in the use of contractions when Phantasma speaks.

• I Wont Forget You

  (#) Enelya_Linde 2006-03-27 04:14:32 PM

  Yes, the inconsidfjhsdlkjd GAH! Cannot spell, can I? Inconsistencies... likely spelled wrong, but not the point. The ' ' 's in contractions are a bane to any fandom, and a drawback to any fic. I found your fic somewhat original, yes, if based upon Movie!Narnia, and the line was well-done. I enjoyed.

• I Wont Forget You

  (#) Nicole 2006-04-07 11:02:12 PM

  I loved it! Edmund is my favorite character so I loved how you portrayed him as the sentimental saviour.

• I Wont Forget You

  (#) Elliekin 2006-05-07 01:13:22 PM

  I admit when I started reading this I thought it was going to be a Mary-Sue, but you walked the line well between OC and 'Sue. :) This was a nice fic and quite sweet (and it helps that Edmund's my favourite character :P). The only problem with it, I think, was some missing punctuation, such as 's. Apart from that, well done!

• I Wont Forget You

  (#) SayoriWakaba 2009-02-26 01:35:14 PM

  At first I was confused by the beginning, because it sonded like a Mary-Sue, but then it changed and it was very moving. I love how you captured Phantasma's innocence and portrayed it. I absolutely love any stories that have edmund in them ( and you ask why, PSHH ;D), and this one is definitely the best I've read so far. I love it ! Please keep writing!

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