(#) BlacknWhiteRainbow 2007-11-22It's Gerard! YAYAYAMAHAMA!
I think I am quite write. The story's good so far. You're writing the exposition right, which can be a little boring, the story not it full swing yet. That's my opinon. If you want help on it, or someone to edit it or something just message me.
Thanks for mentioning my name, I feel special.
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