(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2007-11-25you loser, we need more drama that that
you could've at least described the door jammed sex scene!
wow, i must be the most sexcrazed reviewer on this site XD meh
i love it as always, and know that my complaints are pure sarcastic remarks haha
Author's responseYou know I really did consider having a sex scene in this chapter, but I was pressed on time as it was and it takes me forever to write a good sex scene. That first sex scene I ever did for this story took me about a week to get write, unlike some of the other scenes that just take about fifteen minuites. The reveal scene was giving me trouble as well and I'm still not sure about it. I'll try and make it up to you in the near future though.
I wanted more description bummed ):
and I wanted the parents to find out to add Drama!!!
Update Soon, please.
Author's responseI'm sorry, I'm not used to putting a lot of drama in my stories. Plus, I have no good idea of how their parents would react, it was kind of tough with Gerards reaction alone and I'm still a little unsure of it.
Guh! Now I'm starting to feel like I've ruined the story.
(#) x_Charlie_x 2007-11-25well... i really liked it lol
funny as always and provided the best distraction from my rs essay since i watched all the mighty boosh episodes on youtube the other day...
I liked the reactions, they seemed pretty realisitic... as realistic as you can imagine em to be without experiencing it anyway.
I liked Lyns reaction =)
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-11-25Haha, Lyn's reaction=my reaction. =] If I ever saw a security tape of some hot guy I knew and his hot boyfriend getting ready to fuck, I would NOT let them turn it off!!!
Urgh...I sound like such a pervert! :[
Lol! Anyway, I thought that it was perfect!!! The reactions were awesome!!!
Ah, Jeph, we all love him!!! ^_^
This story rocks!!!
(#) kiramaree28 2007-11-30You put my 3 favourite things in this story. Gay men. Lots of sex scenes. MCR. You shouldn't be sorry for anything nor did you ruin the story. It was great. Its now 6am and I've been reading MCR fanfic all night, yours being the latest. It had enough excitement, humor and suspense in it to keep me not only wide awake but completely engrossed in the story and even though it's so late (or early as it may be) i just want to keep reading and wish there was more!!!
Author's responseWell thank you and you're wellcome.
- awww dude...
you didn't ruin the chapter, I just would've liked to see the parents reaction.
Please Update, I'm begging you!!!
and do you have msn/?
cause if so,
add me email@example.com
Author's responseI'm working on the last part of chapter 11 right now. I don't want to make any promisses but I think I might have it by the end of the week, Wensday of next week if I get too caught up in school and work.
Sorry I don't have MSN. I don't do the online chat thing due to a bad experience a couple of years ago and my slow ass computer. If what you gave me is an email adress then I can contact you through that. Mine is firstname.lastname@example.org. I also have a myspace that you could contact me through, there's a link on my profile.
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