(#) GoogleGeek 2007-11-29Yay, I was thinking about this story the other day. =]
It's cool yet odd how they go to the same school but didn't know it.I wish my school was bigger.
The last line was probably my favorite.
Update again, soon. =]
Author's response:D thanks for reviewing!
just in case you look at the reviews again before I update... do you want Panic! to be brought in ASAP or is it okay if I dawdle with Original Characters for a while? jw what you guys want :]
(#) GoogleGeek 2007-11-30I always check back my reviews, just so they come up and stuff.
I don't really mind if Panic! aren't the beginning couple of chapters, just as long as they're there. Haha.
Author's response:) Thanks! That's really helpful. I'll probably alter my plot a touch to bring some of them in sooner ;D
- Um, guts to be critical. I would be if I could be. :D Just cause I personally really appreciate constructive criticism. You spell well, dialogue is good. Her brother's a little immature. That's about all the criticism I have. slips from mentor mode to fangirl mode OMG OMG!! I LOVE IT! Seriously, I really do like it. It's got a lot of potential. I especially like the line "the unmentionable one". Hehe!
Author's responsehee hee :P Thanks so much! :) Your review made me smile. Thank you for being critical, I now have something to work on/ think about :D THANKS!
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