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Ch.2 Hello, Hello Grace

by i_heart_cliches 3 Reviews

Nichole goes to lunch with Tyler and /most/ of Hello Grace.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: G - Genres: Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2007/11/25 - Updated: 2007/11/25 - 2006 words

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  • So The Story Goes...

    (#) GoogleGeek 2007-11-29 05:46:38 PM

    Yay, I was thinking about this story the other day. =]
    It's cool yet odd how they go to the same school but didn't know it.I wish my school was bigger.
    The last line was probably my favorite.
    Update again, soon. =]

    Author's response

    :D thanks for reviewing!

    just in case you look at the reviews again before I update... do you want Panic! to be brought in ASAP or is it okay if I dawdle with Original Characters for a while? jw what you guys want :]

    thanks!
  • So The Story Goes...

    (#) GoogleGeek 2007-11-30 08:39:33 PM

    I always check back my reviews, just so they come up and stuff.
    I don't really mind if Panic! aren't the beginning couple of chapters, just as long as they're there. Haha.

    =]

    Author's response

    :) Thanks! That's really helpful. I'll probably alter my plot a touch to bring some of them in sooner ;D
  • So The Story Goes...

    (#) bindie611 2007-12-01 07:07:38 PM

    Um, guts to be critical. I would be if I could be. :D Just cause I personally really appreciate constructive criticism. You spell well, dialogue is good. Her brother's a little immature. That's about all the criticism I have. slips from mentor mode to fangirl mode OMG OMG!! I LOVE IT! Seriously, I really do like it. It's got a lot of potential. I especially like the line "the unmentionable one". Hehe!
    More please!

    Author's response

    hee hee :P Thanks so much! :) Your review made me smile. Thank you for being critical, I now have something to work on/ think about :D THANKS!

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