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based on a true event. poem narrating the thoughts of a girl who loved a boy so much. too much, that she took her own life.
- An interesting little piece, although suicide has been done quite a few times. Your syntex was a little off, perhaps if you sat down and just rewrote it...let the words flow out a bit more. All in all it was moving, even if "Cuz" slightly ruined the romantic mood. I hope this review was helpful! :)