(#) celerystalksatnoon 2006-06-07So even though i seem to have issues with reading anything that doesn't have a lot of white space/ paragraph breaks (what the heck, me?), i put that aside for your story (are you proud?). It was sweet, it was cute, it was 47 other generic-yet-nice adjectives. Mostly though, it was rather in character for Naruto (according to me). Well done.
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