- Okay, who knocked Joe up?
(Yeah, I know, not really a proper coment, but I'm starting to feel very repetative saying that you rock and do on and so forth over and over again... So I'll just stick with random funnyful stuff. ///_^)
(#) redballoon 2007-12-10ouch! rejected! ...maybe not on purpose...but still.
first off, joe better not be trying to get into soap's pants.
and second, even if soap is sick...guess who will take care of her? mhm, it's pete!
im loving this story, so please update soon!
(#) x_slowdown 2007-12-10LOL.
Bloody Joe and his germs.
You should really get some dramatic music going on with the last bit of the chapter, or one of those Hollywood voice overs. And then it could be all like "Will Joe feel better?" dundundunn
Really good chatper! (:
- Hahahaha of course she sneezes. This has nothing much to do with the story, but I liked the movie clip thing that you wrote out. I've never seen that movie, but it added a very poignant flavour to the chapter. Maybe that's cause I've only ever ruined one piece of art that I've done (purposefully) and it was in a moment of very angry anger and sadness. Teehee.
I loved it. Pophie allllll the way!!!
(#) glindapsawyer 2007-12-11poor JoeTroh. he would think he's preggers. haha.
What Dreams May COme is such a beautiful movie.
i must be the only one who is anti wentz. and pro troh. oh well. troh over wentz any day. and you may be convincing me that he has a heart... ahem, maybe.
(#) astrozombie28 2007-12-11oooooooh god i feel joes pain (kinda). i'm absolutely DYING here...tonsilitis, chest infection and the MOTHER of all colds...looovely ;/ not. grrrrr.
bwahaha joes little 'pregnancy scare'...i was sick in school last week. looovely, i know your thinking. not only was it in school...it was in the middle of my pre-mock-junior certificate exam (Junior Certificate = first out of the two major state exams in Ireland :D) and i had to leave...so yeah i have a lovely four percent on my technical graphics exam :D thats normally one of my A subjects haha
aaaaaaah poor petey. so close...and yet so far.
(#) SugarPlumFaerie 2007-12-11Awww poor Joey (did I really just...hmmm). I think we have a movie love connection thing going, because I absolutely -adore- What Dreams May Come.
Of course Pete decides to kiss her at the exact wrong moment. He just wouldn't be Pete if everything went smoothly, would he?
I'm on the fence about Joe and Pete. Someone here made me love Joe, but I feel for Pete...arrrgh I can't make up my mind.
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