(#) Great_Writer_Sarah 2007-12-22I've often been disappointed by KakaIru stories in the past, as they always portray the relationship as a romance between two giddy schoolgirls. With your story, however, such fears are rejected with much relief. 'Disjecta Membra' is one of the few stories I've read where at the end I realized that is the type of story I've always wanted to write: a long, beautiful narrative with fleshed-out characters and truly memorable scenes. This is the Iruka some Naruto fans fear to tread; happy on the outside, hurting on the inside. This could possibly be my most favorite KakaIru story now. My only complaint? It's your only story! I hope you dip your toes deeper into the Naruto fandom, 'cos what you've written so far is simply fantastic. Cheers!
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