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How lucky can she get?

by road 3 Reviews

A different look on what would happen if Hinata ended up on the same team as Naruto and Saske.(A naruhina fanfiction)

Category: Naruto - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters: Hinata,Iruka,Naruto,Sasuke - Warnings: [V] - Chapters: 10 - Published: 2007/12/17 - Updated: 2008/06/08 - 5387 words

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  • How lucky can she get?

    (#) inuyasha67 2007-12-27 05:30:06 PM

    wow....hahha.....
    ur soo weird!!!
    hinata and naruto will end up together
    thats wut makes it dumb
    change things a lil bit
    make it fun
    like hinata and naruto is to normal
    leave ur story the way it is butt
    make a new one with more humour
    not all romance and sex-warnings
    make it interesting....
    no offence its a nice story but its to mushhyy make it funny at least
    like a messed up relationship that in the end it gets better
    or a nce relation ship that sukks
    or a relationship with naruto n sasuke thats thier gay!
    MAKE IT FUNNY
    OR SCARY
    or a LITTLE ROMMANTIC AND A LITTLE FUNNY
    all i hav to say is......................
    FIX IT
  • How lucky can she get?

    (#) Kurosaki 2008-01-17 06:21:49 AM

    Man dont listen to that person i fell in love with it ...it is an amazing story just hurry and get chapter 7 done :P

    Author's response

    i like your style!i hope you keep enjoying my story!don't worry,ill try to post my next chapter quickly.
  • How lucky can she get?

    (#) Dakushna 2013-04-23 05:56:25 PM

    It's a little stale and I get no spark from reading this, sorry

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