(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-12-27haha great chapter
no. of course love wouldnt exist without cute puppies
and pete definately needs to take his own advice - giggles
dirty was funny adn it was gorgous how pete was getting a lil jealous
another great chapter
TEAM PETE lol
(#) ---delilah 2007-12-27wow i havent reviewed for a while.
so im going to have to start this off with a HOLA!!!
im deffinitly on TEAM PETE.
i really like Hemmy's pov, it fills in the gaps between soaps&petes pov.
i wonder how soap feels get checked out? flattered or violated?
although i do love the akwardness of pete, i also think he should jsut "jump her bones".
this was a great chapter.
- so i really excited for SOap and pete to get together
that reminded me of (let's get together yeah yeah yeah, let's got together tonight) from greece or the parent trap or something...yeahh
haha ok and i like that hemingway is cute and adorable
and i like how soap describes pete as "sleepy emo boy."
(#) redballoon 2007-12-27oh my goodness.
pete needs to make a move, man. we all know that he can be a cocky little boy, so why not be now?!
and i absolutley LOVE how Hemmingway is playing matchmaker. it made me smile! and the song quote was brilliant.
incredible as always! update soon please!
(#) glindapsawyer 2007-12-27haha, Hemmy knows he's adorable. Smart too. My dog doesn't grasp the concept of fetch half the time.
For some reason the last bit with Pete and Dirty, the "She's like a sister to me." "Yeah, I know." was really, really funny.
(#) glindapsawyer 2007-12-27Haha, Hemmy knows he's adorable. Smart too. My dog doesn't grasp the concept of fetch half the time. She doesn't bring the toy back!
For some reason the last bit with Pete and Dirty, the "I think of her like a sister..." "Yeah I know." was really, really funny.
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